Outdoor scene & ending were changed so story makes a lot more sense.
Will post new storyboards in a few days.
Should have finalized Animatic by next week.
Dec 21 deadline:
Animators- character designs (Tamara will specify)
Erica - Final Animatic
Charenelle - Music and family choices
Laura- Backgrounds (we'll talk)
Notes from Meeting - Changes to Gerald story - 12/14/11
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| Sc2 - bedroom |
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| Sc5 - Entrance Hall |
Scene 2 - Bedroom
"Sometimes he is loud" - knocking things off desk as he walks down tabletop
"Sometimes he doesn't make a sound" - floating down puff ball and lands on skateboard
Scene 3 - Kitchen-
farshot- arrives on skateboard
- climbs up shelves
medium - gerald leans on cereal box and it falls over
Scene 5 - entrance hall - Original Angle - cameral up above
Scene 6 - Outdoors
- "He doesn't bother anybody" - Gerald gets into toy car.
- "but ppl do not leave him alone" - boy holds remote control
- car heavy and doesnt move
- "You do not belong here" - boy picks up gerald by tail and throws him out
- "Go find a new home" - gerald on floor like just dropped there. suitcase thrown out after him.
- car drives away.
scene 7 - Ending
- "Theres a mouse in my house, he never bothers me" - Gerald walking depressed in straight line with same camera as scene 2. dark but shapes look like desk scene. As he looks in mirror see light shaped as mouse hole.
- "I saw him in the mirror, he reminds me of me" - As light gets brighter viewer realizes that gerald is in mouse hole. mirror is broken piece of glass. although shapes are similar to ones on desk they are actually mouse versions (ex. box=matchbox)
- "I know what he does" - close up face. more confident mouse
- "I live in this house" - picture of house on wall
- "I am the mouse" - close up shot of mouse hole. Gerald is inside looking a mirror.
- "Gerald that's me" - far shot of mouse hole
- Zoom out from mouse hole and out of house window (backwards of opening shot) - "The End"
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